Affidavit Drafting Guidance

Summary

When drafting an affidavit, start with a clear purpose statement. Organize the document with an introduction, background, inaccuracies, and conclusion. Use formal language and provide evidence for each event. For example, refer to yourself formally and describe events factually. Ensure the affidavit is concise and well-structured, focusing on key inaccuracies. Consider seeking legal advice for personalized guidance.

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im writing my own affidavit im opposing nsw dcj and their application initiating care proceedings in relation to my two children whom i believe should not have been removed from my care, in dcjs application the report is biased in my opinion only detailing events occured in a way to justify said application. when actually the facts once put in context are nothing to what dcj is making the whole situatuion seem.. so im at the beginning of my affidavit my question is how do i word the introduction in a professional legal manner, stern but not over confident.. i think a more direct question is how would you finish this sentence, the purpose of this affidavit is....
Hi Michael! You could finish the sentence like this: "The purpose of this affidavit is to present a factual and comprehensive account that challenges the claims made by the Department of Communities and Justice, demonstrating that the removal of my children was unjustified and not in their best interests."
brilliant!
I'm glad you found the suggestion helpful, Michael! If you need further assistance with structuring your affidavit or any other legal information, feel free to ask.
awesome , whats my next move ? i was planning on starting to pin point and state the inaccuracies one by one do you think this is a good idea ? im hesitant because im submitting this affivdavit tomorrow at my dispute resolution cinference which will be me first chance to have a voice but i understand the dispute resolution has a seperate purpose and it isnt a platform for me to do this do you think its ok to put everything into one affidavit ?
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It's important to be concise and focus on key inaccuracies that directly support your case. In your affidavit, clearly state each inaccuracy with supporting evidence. Keep your language factual and objective. You can include all relevant information, but ensure it's well-organized and easy to follow.
Would you like more help with structuring the affidavit?
yes please
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To help structure your affidavit effectively:
- Introduction: State the purpose clearly.
- Background: Provide relevant context and details.
- Inaccuracies: List inaccuracies with evidence.
- Conclusion: Summarize your stance and desired outcome.
Would you like specific guidance on any section?
ok so we got the introduction sorted how do i begin for the background whats the best phrase to start with
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You could start the background section with: "To provide context for this affidavit, I will outline the relevant events and circumstances surrounding the care proceedings initiated by the Department of Communities and Justice." This sets the stage for detailing the situation in a structured manner.
in order to provide context ?
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The phrase "In order to provide context for this affidavit, I will outline the relevant events and circumstances surrounding the care proceedings initiated by the Department of Communities and Justice." is a solid start. It introduces your background section clearly and sets the stage for detailing the situation.
If you need more specific tips on structuring or content, feel free to ask!
now i start with the details of events occurred? the context ?
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To begin detailing the events and context in your affidavit, start with a chronological order of key events, focusing on facts, dates, and evidence. Ensure each event is clearly linked to the inaccuracies you aim to address. Would you like guidance on how to express specific events or details?
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To express specific events clearly, use the following structure:
- Date and Event: Begin with the date and describe the event factually.
- Description: Provide detailed context and information.
- Evidence: Mention any evidence supporting your claims.
- Link to Inaccuracy: Highlight how this event contradicts the opposing party's claims.
Feel free to ask for more guidance on particular sections!
how do i refer to myself for this part ? for example " On the 30th of december around *:30am at my childrens mothers place of residence her and i began a verbal argument , i feel like her and i isnt the right choice ?
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For a more formal tone, you could say: "On the 30th of December around *:30am, at the residence of my children's mother, a verbal argument ensued between us." This phrase clearly identifies the parties involved without informal language.
i need advice on what i should do about taking legal action and regaining care of my children as fast as possible, i will upload my statement
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You’re already on the right track by preparing your affidavit. Here are some general steps for taking legal action to regain care of your children in New South Wales:
- Dispute Resolution Conference: Attend the conference and present your case effectively. Focus on key inaccuracies and evidence.
- Legal Representation: Consider engaging a lawyer for guidance through the legal process.
- Court Applications: File necessary applications to challenge the department’s decision.
Would you like more detailed information on any of these steps?